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Black Ice, an AdventureTime FanComic page 3 by IceQueenRocks Black Ice, an AdventureTime FanComic page 3 by IceQueenRocks
Black Ice, an Adventure Time FanComic
Page 3
by Sky, IceQueenRocks

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Panel 1:
IceQueen: Oh Finn... don’t ever scare me like that again... *hugs tighter* I dont know who that Dark Finn was, but please matter what happens... never turn to dark forces...

Finn: *return the hug**saddnes* but... mother I... I-I... urgh... you’ll be so disappointed in me... ... but... oh glob, I’m so sorry... *pause* what Dark Finn says... is the truth...

Panel 2:
IQ: *sorrowfully looks into nothingness then closes her eyes and holds him tighter, softly crying*… … … ... … I understand... … … … … Finn ... my son... please.... be strong in this... like you always have been... always are... be strong... overcome... and know that I love you...

SFX: jiwa (sniff; tear)

Panel 3:
Finn: Oh Mother... … and I lo-- *grunts in paint* I... I... can’t hold him back.... much... longer... … … I'm sorry Mother... *shuts eyes tight and tenses in more pain*

SFX: doron (transform)

IQ: …. …. … ??

Panel 4:
Finn/Dark Finn: *roars in pain and shoves IQ away*

SFX: gurin (push; shove)

IQ: *is shoved away* Finn...!!


To beeeeeeeeee Continued!

Page 3!!! :dummy:
Leave a comment plz!

Based on an rp with :iconevildarkfinn:

Finn... Adventure/Time-PenWard
Simona, Ice Queen... half OC half canon by Me/AdventureTime-PenWard-Natasha
ART BELONGS TO ME! :iconpewdieplz:
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Vision: I really loved how you putted those Japanese words to express the emotions in each panel, it's just something I don't see a lot in fan comics! the second panel, it looks like as if she just had a sad emotion, though, in the description shes crying softly, I guess you should of added tears on her ^^, it would really make that emotion pop out you know? And the last panel, it kinda looks like Finn is choking/strangling her, if you added some action lines, maybe it would really look like a push. :)

Originality: O.M.G, This was based on a RP I see, it has a really good plot, I love the way how Ice Queen isn't her evil self in this comic like she is in the actual show, and the other Finn is evil, which makes it even pop out more! The Personalities of each character is what makes this comic seem super original.

Technique: Once again, the little Japanese words expressing the emotions is just a really great way of making the comic, and the last panel, i'm just in love with the way you did the background, its like its a bigger and yet transparent version of the main one in the middle, and I have to say, it is pretty hard to do backgrounds like that and you've manage to do it!

Impact: This plot is really good, turning a roleplay into a then, that means both are good! This is really all I have to say on the impact.
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AdventurerFan Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student Artist
I love it! Can't wait for the next one! No rush!!! No rush at all!
Fovolviing Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Your art style is great, I cannot wait to see more of this comic.
PrincessofdarknessX6 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconclapplz: I cannot wait to see more^^
EvilDarkFinn Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
(((Great work Sky :D)))
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